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Cover by Trace Edward Zaber
Copyright © 2004

ELECTRICAL STORM

Available now from Amber Quill Press

Alison Tholl knew she'd lost the best thing in her life the year before when she ended her relationship with Paul Walker. Still not over him, she returns to scene of their parting. Time couldn't heal the wounds to her heart, but could it rip open and give her another chance with her lover?


Reviews:

"This book is great!... Alison is a woman who is given a second chance at love and makes her dreams come true. I highly recommend this book to all erotica lovers who enjoy a good love story along with great sex! " - 4 Hearts, Angel Brewer, The Romance Studio

"Just when I thought I had the story figured out, the plot took an unexpected twist that made Electrical Storm even more interesting. Ms. Jordan is a very talented author and one to watch for in the future. If you are looking for a complete and fulfilling, yet compact, story then Electrical Storm is the one for you!" - 4 cups, Susan White, Coffee Time Romance

"Electrical Storm is an extremely sexy, erotic, romantic story. Of course, everyone loves the idea of being able to turn back time and catch the one that got away. Ms. Jordan captures that idea in one dramatically short, steamy, hot novella. I liked the paranormal aspect of the storyline, as well as the extremely scintillating love scenes that are prominent in this twenty-four page story. Ms. Jordan pens a story that is short, sweet, and to the point, in more ways than one. I enjoyed it and was sorry that it ended so quickly…" - Ansley Velarde, The Road to Romance

"Electrical Storm is a time travel romance that is short, sweet and sexy with an interesting concept about being given a second chance at love. There are a few twists in the plot that will have you smiling and cheering on this couple till the very end. For a quick, fun, and hot read try out this book. You'll love it, just like I did." - 4 Stars, Aggie Tsirikas, Just Erotic Romance Reviews

"Electrical Storm is a very short read. That said, it was an enjoyable read filled with erotic love scenes and the happiness that comes with being given a second chance. Though the plot is short and to the point, Isabella Jordan uses her pages well to create a memorable reunion between two wounded lovers. Everyone has wanted to change the past at some point in their life and in Electrical Storm, the reader is given the chance to see how a second chance might just turn out. This was a short and sweet read that gives a glimpse of what everyone would like to see, a second chance at lost love." - Sara, Fallen Angels Reviews

"Reading Electrical Storm will not take you long, maybe ten minutes, fifteen at the most. The story will give you hope that mistakes and fears can be overcome; it just might take a little longer than you wanted. When you have a few minutes to spare, don’t miss Electrical Storm. You never know when you might need a storm of your own." - Pam, A Romance Review

"Electrical Storm by Isabella Jordan is a short paranormal erotica but one that is worth reading. Ms. Jordan knows how to make second chances worth of reading. Allison Tholl will do anything if she were given the chance to repeat history. The only man she ever loved was Paul Walker. The hurt in his eyes has remained in her heart and soul regretting the reason she said no. Now years later, still single and no children, she wants him back. What you wish for is what you get? This is why Allison must not screw it up like she did before. Ms. Jordan did a great job in this short erotica that makes me wish it were longer. Paul is a man who this reviewer would have liked to know more about besides what was written. Above all it is a great book and I look forward to more of Ms. Jordan’s beautiful stories." - 4 1/2 Unicorns, Melinda, Enchanted in Romance Reviews

"Electrical Storm is a well-written, enlightening story with twists and turns in the plot that I enjoyed. I recommend it for anyone who’s ever wanted a second chance." - Delia, JoyfullyReviewed.com

"This story makes you realize how you shouldn't take anyone for granted, and sometimes you should rethink your priorities. You'll rejoice along with Alison when she realizes that life has granted her a second chance. And you'll definitely heat up when Alison decides to celebrates her reunion. Sex between Alison and Paul is hotter than its ever been, after all, distance does make the heart grow fonder and the sex even steamier."

"Isabella Jordan has done a great job with this short story. Just when you're wondering how she'll tie this all up, she surprises you with a beautiful ending. Now this is a true erotic romance." - Ali, simplyali.blogspot.com

Excerpt:

Thunder rumbled angrily in the background as she moved closer to him, slid her arms around his waist. The solid warmth of his body was a homecoming, arousing. She stared up into his face until his gaze met hers and she read the pain there. Pain she'd inflicted on him.

Well, if she could struck by lightning and travel through time, just maybe she could take that pain away. She'd do anything…

"Paul, I love you."

His eyes closed tightly against her words and he tried to pull away from her, but she held fast.

"Alison, I can't take this," he said. When he opened his eyes again, she saw anger, frustration. "You say you love me, but you prove to me in a hundred little ways that you don't. Tonight I asked you to marry me and-"

She stopped him by pressing her fingers to his lips. It wasn't lost on her that she'd probably been struck by lightning in this reality walking away from him. Their separation had already happened.

"Paul," she said slowly, shivering in the rain that fell hard now. "Whatever I said to you tonight, whatever I made you feel, forgive me. I do love you. I can't live without you.

"Let me prove it," she whispered.

Paul's lips were cold, unrelenting when she stretched up on her toes to press her mouth to his. But Alison didn't back off. The opportunity she'd been given was too precious, and she poured her heart and soul into that kiss as the wind whipped around them. Slowly Paul began to respond, his lips acquiescing to the insistent caress of hers, his heart pounding faster. All at once his arms closed around her in a crushing embrace as he deepened the kiss, and Alison knew a moment's hope.

Oblivious to the storm raging around them, they dropped to their knees on the sand, her fingers plucking at his tie, his hands ripping at the bodice of her dress. With a harsh yank, he exposed the soft mound of her pale breast and his mouth dove for it, softly nipping at the hard tip with his teeth before soothing it with quick lashes of his tongue. Alison strained to push herself into his mouth, moaning out loud, joyous as his dark head moved to the other breast, his lips feasting on her. Her hands clutched in his hair as he pleasured her, and she felt like an ancient goddess there with him in the storm.

The deep ache in her hot wet center quickly grew unbearable, and she shoved him backwards with all her might until he sprawled in the sand. His surprise quickly faded from his features and his expression became decidedly predatory as she scrambled toward him, wildly working at his fine leather belt. In seconds she'd pulled down his slacks, the silk boxers, before tugging at her panties. But Paul caught her about the waist with his strong hands, lowering her over him. The skirt of her dress created a warm tent for their lower bodies. Alison savored the feeling of being lashed by the rain above while rubbing her wet heat on the hot silken length of him.

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